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The boys scrambled across the rocks of the cavern, wet from the rising tide. The smell of hewn stone pervaded the airβdust waiting to be returned to life.
The walls had taken on a luminous sheenβmore vibrant than they should have been after thousands of years. Carvings of livestockβbison, horses, stagsβhad been etched mid-stride, as if the animals were unaware of being stalked. The sound of echoing hooves.
No one was moving.
A nervous chuckle seemed to come from Marvin, one of the inquisitive teens. βLookβitβs like theyβre watching us.β
The others exchanged hesitant glances, then turned their heads to him. They were silent.
For too long.
βMarvin,β Nicholas had furrows on his brow.
And those furrows werenβt typical.
The laughter echoed around the cavern.
βDid you just laugh?β
βIt wasnβt me,β He swore. But his face had contorted into a too-wide grin.
One he tried to controlβvainly.
Then, the walls stirred.
Shadows rippled around the bisonβs hooves. They pounded in echoβbut nothing moved.
The carvings shimmered in the light of the boys’ lanternsβas if the creatures had noticed.
The hooves echoedβfaster.
The boys tried to stand, gripping the stones around them a little too hard.
βHello?β Nicholasβs question bore a panicked ring.
βHello!β An echoβnot Nicholasβ voice.
Thenβfur. On the hooves of the etched bison.
The bisonβs muscles.
Twitching.
The paintings on the wall turned.
Antlers poised.
At the boys.
Who wanted to knowβtoo much.
The boys quickly backed out of the cavern. As they did, the bison returned to their etched poses.
Heard.
The tide recededβbut the hooves still pounded, for those who dared to listen.
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Lina was the quintessential workhorseβshe cared for nothing but the daily grind. Sheβd taken enough from a boss who wanted more than she could deliverβall she wanted was home, and to soak in a bubble bath of kindness.
The park was empty of visitors, leaving only lamplight that bent oddly around puddles of rain for company. The air was coolβso cool that shadows hesitated or lingered, almost as if they found the ground repugnant.
Lina trod the usual path, her bagpack slung carelessly, her eyes glued to the cracked pavement. Something at the periphery of her vision twitchedβperhaps a passerby in a sonic hurry. Or likely a flickering shadow, drifting out of place. She blinked it and flitted out of sight.
A puddle rippledβno wind blew. A leaf hovered in midair, remaining a second too long. Lina snapped her head. The figure appeared at the corner of her eye again, teased by the light.
Precise.
Too exact.
She turned right. It did too. She turned left. It did too. It mimicked every step she took. The light of a park lamp hovered over her, shining on distended shadows that stretched in ways that tightened her stomach.
She stopped. It did too.
She stepped forwardβit moved first.
Her pulse raced. Each of her instincts screamed that she had a mimicβone that tested and teased, floundering at the edges of her perception. Reality shivered.
Her movementsβno longer hers.
She managed to leave the park. The pavement leading from it was familiar β yet out of place. The corners had taken on a razor-like quality that seemed to brush against her skin with ominous fingers. Shadows hung over herβtoo long. The air bore an uncanny memory of what once was.
She couldnβt unseeβit. It echoed every twitch, every glance with uncanny synchrony.
Something had shaped her awareness during those moments. Not in the best way.
She breathed, at last, at a normal rate. But her shoulder twitched, and it did too. It glanced towards unseen cornersβtogether with her.
The street before here echoed the impossible rhythm. The shadow had consumed the edge of her attention.
Original story by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental.
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This day. September 10th in 1960, is the day marathon runner Abebe Bikila completed and won the marathon in Rome–with no shoes.
Each step we take–each footfall tells a tale of struggle and hope. This journey is one of bare feet–one of resilience and hope. And each of us has a pair.
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So it is that the town of Wilkinson gathered to celebrate the sacrifices of those who cared for those who ran towards flames or pain.
Sirens wailed–not for safety, but empty celebration. The confetti little ones in the audience at the town’s stadium fell to its floor in heaps of ash.
The parade was in full swing– cars drove by with garish clowns staring out the window. Jugglers on pogo sticks smiled twisted smiles as they tossed tennis balls in the air.
Confetti ash stuck to spectators’ hands as they waved their party favours. In the middle of the third row, a mask slipped–a child’s gaze felt–
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Which object in your life has been a witness to change or loss, yet remained?
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For those who read The Boy Who Stored Goodbyes in a Box, you’ll remember Boon, the Little Boy who tucked away goodbyes and memories in a box like treasures.
He’s now grown into Detective Boon –a sensitive, empathetic sleuth who doesn’t flinch from a little grit.
This story does deal with a few gritty issues –not too much, but enough to matter.
The lost-and-found corner in Khaji Primary School reeked of deliberately forgotten odours- discarded, unwashed lunchboxes; soiled, smelly tees; textbooks climbing to the ceiling with success
But the room wasn’t all foul odour and disappointment. Miss Lina, the school’s custodian, had placed a Kindness Box where children could leave encouragement and thank you notes.
But kindness kept going…missing.
Notes mysteriously vanished, day by day.
“Chum ah(Oh dear in Hokkien),” a flustered Miss Lina nearly turned upside down herself in her search.
The last straw was a note that read “You matter”.
It vanished.
Like the person never did.
She summoned the police–and something sharp and small arrived.
It clinked.
The musical sound.
Of glass.
“A boy named Boon…stored goodbyes in a box…”
Detective Boon strapped on a pair of forensic gloves, combing the trash like treasure.
The little glass box of goodbyes was married to him –he carried it everywhere in his knapsack.
Khaji Primary still smelled the same –like over ripe banana–as it did years earlier.
The missing notes of kindness were sticky notes that would not detach.
He noticed a peculiar piece of paper, its edges torn.
“You mat…” The rest was jagged scrap.
That nettled Boon…like the missing goodbyes that vanished with those who meant.
“Jia lat…(Terrible) who would stick a knife like that?”
That torn note was the last straw for the Singaporean gumshoe.
It vanished.
Like the person never did.
She summoned the police–and something sharp and small arrived.
Boon’s mind flooded with notes from his Goodbye Box–small. large. tattered. torn.
He felt each at the tips of his forensic-gloved fingers.
But this stood out.
“You matter.”
Compassion bordered in gold, in bubbled handwriting.
It was for her.
The flower by the classroom isle.
The punches.
The crying.
The catcalls.
“Chio Bu (pretty girl in Hokkien).
The video –1000 views within five minutes of its release.
That note was NOT written in erasable ink.
It mattered.
And he had to find it.
A trail of torn paper Boon noticed at the corner of his eye gave him a start.
He followed it to the school’s storeroom.
Where he found the missing pieces and letters of the note scattered on the floor.
The room’s occupant –Ah Tan.
The school’s janitor.
Boon didn’t confront him –directly.
He waited.
School had to be over.
He sat in Tan’s chair, swivelling it until the janitor appeared.
He didn’t speak to the man. There was a simple note on the table.
“You can’t tear what she needed others to hear.”
Ah Tan unfolded it. The old man unfolded it, hands trembling.
He looked frail. More than boon remembered.
“Boon…I only took the ones I wished you all had written for me. I cleaned for you.”
Boon placed an arm on his shoulder.
Boon returned to Khaji Primary School a few weeks later.
Miss Lina had put out the Kindness Box again. It overflowed with Post-Its.
A smaller glass box sat next to it.
No label.
Inside, parts of a small note, combined with sticky tape.