The Final Witness

Detective Jonas Kay was the best in his field—he never left a case unsolved. The Lieutenant had an uncanny ability for unearthing dark truths, shattering iron-clad alibis, and dragging confessions from the unwilling.

There was one thing he couldn’t explain, though. How he always knew who the killer was.

“How does he know?” They whispered in the precinct coffee rooms. Officers gave up their seats for him. Criminals fled as he approached. He commanded fear and respect.

But, across the interrogation table, something felt—different. The suspect wasn’t breaking a sweat. Or making any pleas.

He was just smiling.

A slow, crooked smirk.

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Kay laid the evidence neatly on the table. The suspect on the CCTV camera footage. The victim’s blood on his shirt. The case should have been straightforward.

Except—it wasn’t. The suspect eyed Kay, without fear or doubt, but with recognition. He leaned forward, a movement so casual, that his pulse spiked. He described the details of the crime scene—details never released to the public.

He never denied them. Not one. “Detective, how did you know about the scar?” His eyes were lowered; a sneer shaped the edges of his mouth. “It comes so easy for you, doesn’t it? Like the answers were waiting for you.”

Kay’s breath caught, and his vision blurred for a second. The victim DID have a scar on his wrist. But no one had ever mentioned that. Had he seen it? Or had he just… known?

“So you do remember them. Even before the blood dries. ” ****************************************************************

Kay’s head throbbed like an erratic drumbeat. His fingers nearly tore his case notes as he ran through them. Something just wasn’t adding up. Dates mismatched. Witnesses seem coached…altered.

Then, his fingers landed on a case that took place five years earlier, involving the same crime scene. The same suspect. The same confession.

No…that was just ridiculous.

His breath became sharper…quicker. His eyes scanned another case. Another. And another. Different names, same crime. The faces were..odd. But the confessions? Exact replicas.

The suspect eyed him, amused derision lacing his eyes. “You’re catching on quickly, aren’t you? Dig a little deeper, Detective Kay. When did this case begin? The names mirrored each other. But the faces? They were different.

Kay took a quick breath and stumbled back. The cases were complete fakes. He had been solving the same crime…again. And again. No matter how many times he solved it, it never ended.

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The door burst open. A male nurse strode in, his eyes ominously dark. In his hands, something made of thick fabric.

“Kay,” he directed. “Sit.”

Kay stood rooted. His heart hammered his chest.

CHAIR?

He turned, and his reflection stared at him. But the interrogation room wasn’t the same. It was white. Empty. One chair. One clipboard.

The nurse pushed him onto the chair and unveiled the fabric—-part of a jacket.

The kind of jacket that locked a man in place.

The case file? There never was .

The Final Entry

A lone candle flickers in an abandoned study, its wax gathering in a pool on the rosewood table. Layers of dust shroud the room,  undisturbed for years. A tattered journal lies open on the table, its yellowed pages filled with frantic script. The air is dense with something intangible—not just with time and dust, but with a presence unseen.   

Historian Bob Thorne and his wife, in search of the perfect abode, come across the rustic wonder. 

The rooms were vacant, its halls silent—but it was inviting. 

They come across the journal, resting in wait on the study table. The words should have faded over the two decades that anyone was last seen in the room—but the ink was gleaming, wet beneath the candlelight.  

Bob thumbed eagerly through its yellowed pages. The entries seemed run-of-the-mill, nondescript at first—daily reflections and complaints about the heat. 

Until his fingers stopped at a page dated 50 years earlier. Fifty years of silence, pierced by a page that should not have existed. The ink was fresh, as if penned only moments earlier. 

A draft crept through the room, although its windows were completely sealed. Bob’s eyes hovered over the final entry quickly, wanting to reach its end—but prompted Bob to freeze. Dated that day, the journal documented his movements, sentence by finely penned sentence, as though unseen eyes were watching. 

The writer of that entry never meant for anyone to read it. But now that Bob had, he understood why.

The candle flickered violently; there was a shadow on the wall, not its own. It shifted, morphing into a shape so distended that Bob fell back. 

The journal’s pages slowly turned on their own, with a new line:

You are not alone. 

Bob felt it—a cold, chilling breath creeping down his neck. The breath of another person in the room. Unseen. 

He stumbled back, his heart hammering in his chest, with the flame becoming—taller. Extending. Coming closer to him. 

The ink bled onto the journal’s page, forming words not there before. Darkness swallowed Bob whole, and a whisper came from the place he least expected–his own mind. 

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Leave the Light On Part 2

You may not know who you are. –Michelle Liew

Part 1 is here

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Lina’s fingers wound around the photograph, clutching it. Hard. She couldn’t get past the resemblance. The man in the photo. Future Eric.

But how?

The air in the apartment had never been warm, but it was now ice in her lungs.The cold clenched her troat. Her eyes widened, pupils dilating, as Eric stared at the picture without a word. His tiny fingers caressed its aged surface. Slow. Deliberate. Almost reverent.

A little too lovingly.

He shouldn’t have known that face. Shouldn’t have any idea who it was. But his eyes darkened–they were too old for a child’s.

Then he whispered softly:

“I remember now.”

It was not his voice. Not entirely.

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The little boy started to speak–unclearly.

About things he shouldn’t have known. He described his mother’s room, how she laughed–how she bawled ceaselessly when they “came for her.” His voice sounded far away, as if he was recalling a dream.

“She begged them not to take me,” Eric murmured. “But they don’t listen.”

His voice shifted, as though two of him were speaking at once. One was the little boy in front of her–the other was someone ancient. Menacing.

The baby monitor came to life again. This time, the whispering wasn’t far away–it was right next to her ear.

She stumbled back. The closet door gaped open, like a ravenous mouth, spilling shadows into the room. A breath of cold air rushed out of it, along with a scent of damp earth and something–rotten. Eric didn’t look at her anymore. He was looking past her.

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Lina grabbed Eric, ready to run–but the little boy resisted.

He smiled a smile that was a mix of innocence and knowing.

“Mom.” His voice was a soft plea and a commanding threat. “She’s here.”

Then, her name. In urgent, resounding whispers. “Sophie Lew. Sophie Lew.”

They rose, becoming deafening–“SOPHIE LEW!”

The photograph in her grasp had changed. It was no longer Eric, but a grainy picture of her–Sophie.

Screams. Her screams.

The closet slammed shut.

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Lina shook the six-year-old awake. But he never remembered anything.

The once-angry scratches on his arms were gone. In dawn’s light, something seemed different.

The apartment felt–lighter. The whispers had stopped. But the silence was worse.

Her missing person file was now–empty. She, Sophie, was free. As if someone had taken her place.

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Lina’s breath came in punctured gasps. She backed away from the file, hands quivering. The truth pressed down on her, a heavy stone slab. Wrapping her. Suffocating.

She had answers to who the missing girl was– but she did not want to believe them.

Eric stretched, rising from bed. As if nothing had happened. “Mom, what’s wrong?”

She tried to speak, but her throat ran dry. She stared at Eric, open-mouthed. She had no words.

And the apartment was quiet. Too still.

Then, the baby monitor came to life. Dissonant, but familiar.

Lina swiveled, and Eric was standing in front of her, his eyes wide.

But his lips were not moving.

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Leave The Light On Part 1

The past is never really gone. Michelle Liew

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The apartment would have put most tenants off– flickering lights, a musty odour that clung to the air, and shadows that slithered across corridors.

But for single mother Lina Crew, content wasn’t an option–only survival. With her bank account nearly empty and six-year-old Eric to support, a cheap rental like this was all she could afford. Besides, all she wanted–and needed–was a fresh start.

They settled in as best they could, clinging to the promise of some stability after a bruising custody battle. To the relief of the financially-stretched but dedicated mother, he began to make friends.

Perhaps too many. Some…were wrong.

Muffled whispers came from his room. Lina thought nothing of it and let them be; they were nothing but harmless playdates and sleepovers.She didn’t want to be the sort of mother who appeared at her son’s bedroom door in the middle of the night.

Then one night Eric murmured: “The girl in the closet doesn’t like darkness.”

The whispered voices grew louder, bolder. Darker. As if they were not just speaking, but waiting.

Eric’s complaints grew like repeated recordings; soft scratching, like nails clawing desperately on wood, behind the walls. The closet opening and closing. Lina still dismissed them as child’s play. The busy mother always threw herself onto the sofa after a long day, falling asleep in front of him.

Time passed, and young Eric became a mere shell of himself. Odd, rake-like scratches appeared on his arms. His arms, once plump and full of energy, now hung limp. Cold. He stopped talking.

The rakish marks finally caught Lina’s divided attention. Muffled whispers came over the baby monitor one midnight, and she raced to Eric’s room. The little boy was fast asleep.

But the closet door stood ajar. Open, a fraction of an inch– she knew that she had closed it herself.

As if inviting her to explore.

And so she did. But that was all it was–a closet, albeit old, dank and dark.

The scratches on Eric’s arms were becoming deeper, more blood seeping from them with each passing day. She pushed her way into her landlord’s office.

“Ma’am, I don’t think there’s anything to fret over” He waved his arms and pushed her to the door. “Besides, the apartment’s ancient….hey, you knew that when you rented it.”

She found herself at the town library, fingers flicking through countless records in desperation.

A young girl, Sophie, had lived in the apartment decades ago–but had vanished. Her parents had appeared on television, hollow-eyed, grief wrapping them like a second skin.

Clipped behind the the torn pages of the news clipping was another photo- a yellow grainy picture of a man whose sunken eyes stared.

Straight at Lina.

Her throat caught. The man in the photograph was an older version of Eric. The same pale features, the same haunted demeanor.

Lina’s pulse raced as she slammed the file shut. Was the past was talking to her son?

Then Eric’s voice: “Mom, who’s that?”

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