
We learn, when young, that we must write a certain way. That we must behave a certain way.
Over time, the corrections stay.
โ๏ธ โ ๐ โ โ๏ธ
The red pen –
Crosses out –
My scribble –
Wrong.
Too unti –
Wrong –
dy.
Not neat enough.
Wrong.
Again.
โ๏ธ โ ๐ โ โ๏ธ
My red pen erases my wild scribble,
Too untidy on the page.
My red pen circles the wrong words
And they disappear
With the red ink
“You’re too untidy.”
โ๏ธ โ ๐ โ โ๏ธ
The sudden scribble
Cursive –
Frantic –
Pressed on paper
The thoughts –
Come –
As – i -write.
Proper –
โ๏ธ โ ๐ โ โ๏ธ
Original poem by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental
If you like this story, do join me onย Patreon! Buy this blog a coffee โ it keeps the words flowing and the lights Your kindย donationย via Paypal would be greatly appreciated!
